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July 28th, 2005 (12:05 pm)
frustrated

current mood: frustrated

In commenting to [info]silverhill today, I mentioned wanting to write, and it was true, and that was good. Robb's using the Alienware to play World of Warcraft and "recharge," so after much backing-and-forthing, he emailed the file to me so I could use his laptop and write a bit.

Which when I remembered, after reading a ways, why this story had utterly stalled on page 13. I have no fucking idea what it is that my redhead wants to tell Lia, my protagonist. No clue. At all. Even a little bit.

I knew what she wanted to say in the last draft, but in this one, she's got something different on her mind, and I don't know what it is. Shit shit, dammit, and curses even.

Foiled again, or something.

Hmph.

Anyone want to read 13 pages of a story and try and tell me what the fuck YOU think is happening? Comment with an email.

Experience my frustration.

Off to pout.

--K

Comments

Posted by: Hanna ([info]jedicrow)
Posted at: July 28th, 2005 04:13 pm (UTC)

i would if i had any way of getting the file from a computer to the vaio. sorry. :(

-me

Posted by: Douglas ([info]beagley)
Posted at: July 28th, 2005 05:33 pm (UTC)

I'd love to. Forward along!
I keep meaning to build more writerly-connections with folks. I never share anything and rarely read anyone else's work... but I know how valuable it can be and miss it.

Posted by: dough girl =P ([info]identitee)
Posted at: July 28th, 2005 06:02 pm (UTC)

Send it along. =)

Jacquelyn

Posted by: Matt Spencer ([info]happyspector)
Posted at: July 28th, 2005 06:29 pm (UTC)
As per inquiry...

...That's a rhetorical question, right?

Which is to say, send it along.

Posted by: The Jade Cat ([info]jadecat)
Posted at: July 28th, 2005 06:58 pm (UTC)

Would this happen to be the story that you e-mailed me awhile ago that I was terrible about getting back to you on (as in I still haven't)? *feels really bad*

Posted by: K ([info]ariel_in_blue)
Posted at: July 29th, 2005 04:40 am (UTC)

Yes, although technically you're off the hook since a.) no one else got back to me either, and b.) This is version 2.0

--K

Posted by: Kate-Chen ([info]ivory_courtesan)
Posted at: July 29th, 2005 04:14 am (UTC)

I'd love to read it, if you'd let me.

This is Katie, btw--Chris' friend.

I'm glad you're doing ok.

Posted by: K ([info]ariel_in_blue)
Posted at: July 29th, 2005 04:41 am (UTC)

Hey, Katie!

Sure, drop me an email -- mine is kristine . lemay @ gmail . com -- and I'll send it your way.

Thanks for the smile. :)

--K

Posted by: Josh Swasey ([info]balfamor)
Posted at: July 29th, 2005 05:12 am (UTC)
Yay

What're you doing reading this? You're supposed to be writing! Or thinking what to write! Or something!

Anyways, I'll read it!

Mwah!
~Josh

Posted by: Silverjay ([info]silverjay)
Posted at: July 30th, 2005 12:52 am (UTC)

I don't have to read the 13 pages, I know. She desperately wants to lick her right eyeball, but thinks that it might not go over so well.

Yeah, I get that a lot. :/

j

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